PD editing

Who was that comment about "try no to mess it up again" directed towards? I'm asking this because everytime you add to that page, it needs to be cleaned up even further.

Unfortunately it was to you, because:

“	Simply put, each equipment or skill is calculated individually, while being calculated simultaneously with the other equipment or skills. If the 20% from Dark Heavy Stander does not activate, there is still a chance for the Armor with 8% to activate. If the Armor does not activate, then there is still the 5% from the Shield's passive. Once it is activated, all checks will stop and the Passive Defense will be activated.	„

Disregarding the first sentence, does the whole thing sound right to you if its placed first?

replace "Once -it- is activated" with "Once auto-defense activates", and it would o-o. This is what happens when too many people "contribute" to a page, and one person tries to string it all together :|

I don't think

“	If the 20% from Dark Heavy Stander does not activate, there is still a chance for the Armor with 8% to activate. If the Armor does not activate, then there is still the 5% from the Shield's passive. Once it is activated, all checks will stop and the Passive Defense will be activated.	„

fits in because it just comes out of nowhere...

Notice how that was added after your edit? Mind you, a lot of what you added that previous edit was either incorrect or worded really weirdly too. I just didn't bother pointing it out since I was going to redo that page anyway.