STOP

By that I mean your way of writing.

“	They fought for us,	„

First off, you should say Humanity, not necessarily "us". Avoid words such as "I", "we", "me", etc. Keep yourself out of it. Treat the reader as somebody neutral, uninvolved.

“	Kobolds are also infantry but also possess "lesser" technology,	„

That's opinionary Avoid opinions as well.



Also, try not to say words such as "can't", "don't", "I'll". Separate them to cannot, do not, I will. (Well, as I said, avoid "I"s. =P)

“	The "Ogre" Titan is actually a Cyclops but it is not labeled as one.	„

It has one eye, and it's called an Ogre Titan, that does not necessarily make it a Cyclops. Not everything large with one eye is considered a cyclops.

“	You may not believe it, but Fomorians were the ones who invented beer!	„

Don't speak directly to the reader. This is fine if your using it as your user page, but shouldn't be considered data.