Orge

Not going to edit this stuff without permission so I'll post it here.
You wrote "Orge" instead of "Ogre" twice for Bandit Boss Ogre. (http://i.imgur.com/iIOmE34.png)
You also wrote "the worse of the worse" in the Aonbharr section, which I believe should be the "worst of the worst". (although even then, that's a strange wordplay)
Also "multiple" instead of "multiples" in that same paragraph. (http://i.imgur.com/n7ivow4.png)

Not gonna read all of that though, just pointing out the ones that stood out immediately.

I was up late doing office work at the same time. I don't mind people editing my things, and if it's that much of a bother, you can edit it yourself :D Just keep most of my original wording intact.