G1 Edits

Thanks for helping out! ^^
There's a coupla (three) changes I wanna debate, though, if you don't mind me doing so. The first is the change in "Mores are discriminating the humans" to "Mores does not like humans", I put the former there because it's a race issue he has, so I think that qualifies as discrimination. And "does not like" seems a bit tame...I'd suggest "despise" at the least. The second is the change from "urgently asks you to hurry, and gives you the Pendant of the Goddess" to "urgently asking you to hurry, and gives you the Pendant of the Goddess". From what I learned in Writer's Craft, parallelism is important, as in the words should have the same format in writing (e.g. leaving, going or left, gone, not a mixture, except in special cases. I think we should either leave that as "urgently asks you to hurry, and gives you the Pendant of the Goddess" or change it to "urgently asking you to hurry, and giving you the Pendant of the Goddess"The last is a more general-encompassing thing. I know my little habit to start with "And" and "Which" are sentence fragments and therefore improper, but I think writing them that way puts in a lot more impact to whatever the fragment is saying, which was what I aimed for when trying to write something in story format.
But really, thanks a million for the editing work!